Bird Hunting

The cat nation likes this and hereby declare it to be claimed with unclaimable clause. 

Art =8/10
Story =5/10
English translation = 8/10
Tag accuracy = 10/10
Panel cleanliness = 10/10
Text bubble readablility = 10/10
Liquids = 8/10
"Final" shot = 9/10
Backround = 9/10
Body proportions = 10/10

All in all an amazing fap would nut again to this

What's this? Plot that's as interesting and satisfying as the actual sex? Good job!