Benders: Book 1. Discovery Artist: matemi Parody: avatar the last airbender Tags: furry, kemonomimi, shemale +89133 Add to Favorites 67 img 76 305 доп поле скриншотов Comments (11) Comment Comment Send Question 21 February 2021 02:56 Reply Ah yes the first book is complete after months of waiting now to enjoy ( hopefully)Update not what I expected but still good Plot : interesting and leaves room to grow Structure: alittle sloppy in some areas but nothing unforgivable like THLJIntimate scenes: Decent nothing ground breaking but nothing the will leave you sick after seeing itCharacters: interesting if a little flat but it's the first book so not a far critic as of yetConclusion: as of now it's above average as the final critic can only be given if and when finished conclusion 21 February 2021 04:40 Reply judgemental Kaspioxcz 22 February 2021 15:06 Reply Damm i never seen such an awesome made comment on porn site Juice Tank 23 February 2021 03:04 Reply Interesting critique. I would just like to add a few things.I agree with your comments on the plot and characters.Dialogue is a bit monotone, meaning it's either exposition/flashback or it's boring sentences (mainly in sex scene, but I don't know any comics that do dialogoue good in the act), because of that dialogue is why characters seem so bland and 1 dimensional.But nothing too crazy. Critique stands.And also art style is beautiful, not too detailed, but not that bland, so it's really pretty.Overall good comic, and would like to see more. Iiiiii 21 February 2021 07:06 Reply Zuko x cabbage man Answer 21 February 2021 07:31 Reply What is THLJ? Ur12 21 February 2021 09:22 Reply Were is the avatar Iron Man 21 February 2021 12:11 Reply I'll do you one better, who's the Avatar? Drax 21 February 2021 17:25 Reply I do you one better, why is Avatar!? RedKingOfLust 3 May 2021 21:04 Reply I’ll do YOU one better, when is the Avatar?? Guest Guest 5 May 2021 08:28 Reply What the hell is this and why do I like it Related: 6 img New Discovery 17 pages Book fort-nite sexy royale Z-Book 9 pages Lost Fortunes - Mercenaries Book 1 8 pages Discovery Channel
