Marnie wa VANILLA de Koushuunyuu

Meh 

I really wanted this to be good

I must say my expectations weren't met but its ok 6/10 takoyaki

Is that Rose FUCKING MARNIE HOW DARE YOU TOUCH MARNIE HAAAAAAAAA

Fuck off sexbots

Honestly this is better then y'all give credit for.

The story is acceptable, the art is clean and cohesive, and the porn is pretty alright 8/10.

No don't do this to Marnie. She's too pure for this. Whoever made this, I have poisoned your beefaroni.

Logical ugly bastard, huh. Of course. Probably the only one that I am ok with to be honest, other than the fact that Rose fucked Marnie (gotta love the fact that he was punished for his pedophilia act)

I think you did very well on this good work. Love the art. 9/10 on the art would be perfect if you had color. The story was ok not the best but interesting. 6/10 on the story takes up to much of the pictures with words and wasn’t the best read. I would like to see more for sure and it was all in all 7.5/10 and I will be following more of your art. Thank you for this